You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why?
Response:
It is easy to stay alone and do our own work, but doing something to improve our association will give you not only a sense of belonging but also the knowledge that you are making our neighborhood a better place, Also, as globalization comes, you cannot avoid the group society. Therefore, you need to get involved somewhere, clean up and make your group better, so that everyone wins. Now, there are several things to improve our group.
First, you can give back to your association by volunteering. There are a lot of worthy causes, and they could be as simple as volunteering to coach the kid's neighborhood ball team, organizing a bake sale or fundraiser for someone that may be sick or needy in our association, volunteering at a homeless shelter or soup kitchen, or helping or visiting an elderly person who otherwise may not have any family to do so.
second, you might clean up your association. Organize a group of family and friends and set aside one day a week or month to get together and pick up the litter and trash on the roadsides or beaches in your community. It doesn't have to be just your street that you clean up either. Take turns cleaning each other's streets or pick a different street or section of road each time. Just be sure to take proper safety precautions.
Third, you could be active in our association by taking part in local activities such as church events, charities, town hall meetings, or community voting. If it affects you and our group, take part and voice our opinion.
Try to use more variety in your paragraph beginnings. "First..., second..., third..." make your writing look like student writing. Try paragraph beginnings like "One idea" "another way" "in addition to..." "similarly" etc.
답글삭제Thank you for pointing that out! I've also thought about how to change my fixed writing.
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